Can any typesetter give me feedback about this? first time trying to typesett so i would like to hear your honest opinion www46.zippyshare.com/v/97532632/file.html
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| Edited Feb 16, 2014 20:17:49 GMT -6 by Deleted |
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Yo! I checked your TSes out. I'm a noobie TSer, but here are my two cents anyway...
- p003-006, I wouldn't really use Komika Axis as your background font xD It just seems kinda weird, cuz that's usually a title font (since it's big n bold). But you can still use it if you want to, of course. - p005, for the first bubble, I noticed you put extra spacing between the first and second lines... That's not really necessary, it just makes the whole thing look weird... - p007, the second bubble. OMG, I hate vertical bubbles too, but vertical sentences are just as awkward. Iuno what I would've done with this one either tbh. :\ tough one. - p012, the name tag. There's a way to slant the text to fit the angle of the box. You angled it already, but slanting it will go the extra mile  Also, might wanna add some white stroke to the shout dialogue at the bottom there.I really like how you grayed out your thought bubble text It makes the distinction clear between speech and thoughts. I've never thought of doing that before.You've clearly put in a lot of effort in this xD It's really nice. |
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What manga is this btw? It's cool :3
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 - p003-006, I wouldn't really use Komika Axis as your background font xD It just seems kinda weird, cuz that's usually a title font (since it's big n bold). But you can still use it if you want to, of course. - p005, for the first bubble, I noticed you put extra spacing between the first and second lines... That's not really necessary, it just makes the whole thing look weird... - p007, the second bubble. OMG, I hate vertical bubbles too, but vertical sentences are just as awkward. Iuno what I would've done with this one either tbh. :\ tough one. - p012, the name tag. There's a way to slant the text to fit the angle of the box. You angled it already, but slanting it will go the extra mile Also, might wanna add some white stroke to the shout dialogue at the bottom there.I really like how you grayed out your thought bubble text It makes the distinction clear between speech and thoughts. I've never thought of doing that before.You've clearly put in a lot of effort in this xD It's really nice. About your questing concerning the manga It's not out yet just something I'm currently working on XD if you want to read it i will give you the link once it's out I will try again and hope you can continue to give me feedback thanx alot fishiiie |
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| Edited Feb 17, 2014 6:36:21 GMT -6 by Deleted |
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How is this then? www54.zippyshare.com/v/66722124/file.html
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| Edited Feb 17, 2014 15:03:37 GMT -6 by Deleted |
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 Feb 17, 2014 7:49:32 GMT -6 @vodanh said: How is this then? www54.zippyshare.com/v/66722124/file.html- Some sentences are missing periods. Idk, it's kind of a pet peeve of mine as a proofer - Some fonts could be a bit smaller too, to be proportional to the size of the bubble. But I'm mostly talking about p011, that sub-bubble on the top left page. The rest are okay, but could be smaller. XD I find that as a typesetter, the fonts could always be one size smaller than the smallest font you picked. Lolol. Just make sure you look at it in like Windows Preview or something at 100%, and pretend you're reading an actual manga. xD Looking forward to this manga  !! |
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Feb 17, 2014 7:49:32 GMT -6 @vodanh said: How is this then? www54.zippyshare.com/v/66722124/file.html- Some sentences are missing periods. Idk, it's kind of a pet peeve of mine as a proofer - Some fonts could be a bit smaller too, to be proportional to the size of the bubble. But I'm mostly talking about p011, that sub-bubble on the top left page. The rest are okay, but could be smaller. XD I find that as a typesetter, the fonts could always be one size smaller than the smallest font you picked. Lolol. Just make sure you look at it in like Windows Preview or something at 100%, and pretend you're reading an actual manga. xD Looking forward to this manga !! |
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| Edited Feb 18, 2014 13:03:59 GMT -6 by Deleted |
cptcrunch wrote: Dec 13, 2014 12:08:27 GMT -6
Where is chatngo gone I know not related to work but a good question
Where is chatngo gone I know not related to work but a good question
